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Put compound elements last

liberty, the pursuit of happiness, and life
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life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness
He washed the dishes, glasses, and silverware, made the bed, and mopped the floor.
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He made the bed, mopped the floor, and washed the dishes, glasses, and silverware.
The generally poor quality of education in public schools and crime are the main reasons.
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Crime and the generally poor quality of education in public schools are the main reasons.

Korea picked up much of its technology from foreign suppliers of machinery, raw materials, and equipment or from foreign buyers.

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Korea picked up much of its technology from foreign buyers or from foreign suppliers of equipment, machinery, and raw materials.

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