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Parallelism with coordinating conjunctions

the mama bear, the papa bear, and their young cub
CHANGE TO
the mama bear, the papa bear, and the baby bear
Do not fold, put on a spindle, or mutilate.
CHANGE TO
Do not fold, spindle, or mutilate.
He entered gingerly, she with recklessness.
CHANGE TO
He entered gingerly, she recklessly
the plumber's wrench, the carpenter's hammer, and the pen of the writer
CHANGE TO
the plumber's wrench, the carpenter's hammer, and the writer's pen
the good, the bad, and ugly
CHANGE TO
the good, the bad, and the ugly
schoolchildren and the parent
CHANGE TO
schoolchildren and parents
 
OR
the schoolchild and the parent

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