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Sometimes it irks allies such as the French to see America grab so much of the credit for its mediating efforts. But as even the French admit, America is in a league of its own in this business. No other country can match its clout and its credibility with parties on all sides of an argument. Bosnia is the most striking example: a catastrophe so long as America kept its distance, on the mend once America started to lead.
     There are other, less conspicuous examples. Last January an almost comic fracas over a tiny rock in the Aegean briefly threatened to escalate into an alarming conflict between two NATO members, Greece and Turkey. While the European powers looked the other way, and the United Nations called for restraint, the Greeks and the Turks turned to America to help sort the matter out—which, after multiple telephone calls to agitated leaders in Athens and Ankara, it duly did. The next day one of the America diplomats involved, Richard Holbrooke, the star of the Dayton peace talks on Bosnia, described the incident as a microcosm of modern American foreign policy.

But cuts here are political dynamite. Take the government's planned cuts in state help to unemployed and poor people with mortgages, on which spending has grown from £31 in 1979 to £1.1 billion today. Tony Blair, Labour's leader, is determined to stop the cuts. So is Nicholas Winterton, a Tory right-winger keen on cuts in general, who threatens to lead a rebellion against Mr Lilley's plans.
     Or take the recent cuts in non-means-tested invalidity benefits. Many of those claiming the benefits are middle-income people who had to retire early and were advised by their employers to top up their pensions with the benefit. And what are many doing with their new-found leisure? Spending it at Tory coffee mornings, that's what. Mr Lilley has warned colleagues that opposition to cuts in invalidity payments has yet to peak.

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