ClearTips: Stunning sentences
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Some words and phrases, slipped in at various
points in a sentence, can reveal more of your view than mere declaration,
drawing you closer to your readers.
For all their supposed mastery at putting together
other peoples' businesses, investment bankers seem lousy at
merging their own.
That sounds dandy, but last year was a strong
one for the Canadian economy; and these high figures follow several
years of low or even negative returns.
Son of one Revolutionary War hero and son-in-law of
another, Allan Melvill had, as we would say today, good connections.
The system involves the feds in every decision
to hire, which is a troubling precedent; and of course it will
make mistakes.
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